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- I had a busy Sunday
- in Sunday .I got up at 9:00.I did my homework at 11:00.
- And I had lunch at 13:00.I went to bad at 22:00

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- I had a busy Sunday
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- in Sunday .I got up at 9:00.I did my homework at 11:00.
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- iOn Sunday .I got up at 9:00~~.I did~~ and at 11:00 I started doing my homework ~~at 11:00~~.
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- And I had lunch at 13:00.I went to bad at 22:00
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- ~~And~~Then at 11.00 I had lunch ~~at 13:00~~. I went to baed at 22:00
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