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Rock star party
- Tonight I go in concert with my new friend Piter.
- He is working in the Moscow's club, when will be a party.
I love rock music.
- Love when a young man takes his guitar and plays wildly Solo.

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- Tonight I go in concert with my new friend Piter.
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- Tonight I go into a concert with my new friend Pieter.
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- He is working in the Moscow's club, when will be a party.
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- He is work~~ing~~s in the ~~Moscow's club, when~~ club in Moscow that the party will be ~~a party~~held on.
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- He is work~~ing~~s in the "Moscow's" club, whenre there will be a party.
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- I love rock music.
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- Love when a young man takes his guitar and plays wildly Solo.
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- ~~Love~~ I love it when a young man takes his guitar and plays wildly ~~Solo~~alone.
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