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    • I was impressed to Mr. Sony whom his experience was very interesting, strated with his experience when he was in college,and met with the other people that was different culture,custom,and language. i thought , he graduates from top university in indonesia, but in the fact he was not.
    • I realize that how successful he was.And now he was continuing his study in univesity of jogjakarta for doctor,and i got the point from this story that everywhere we studied, it was depend on yourself,so what we wanted, it should be allowed by effort and prayer.

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    • I was impressed to Mr. Sony whom his experience was very interesting, strated with his experience when he was in college,and met with the other people that was different culture,custom,and language. i thought , he graduates from top university in indonesia, but in the fact he was not.
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    • I was impressed toby Mr. Sony whom hise experience was very interesting,. He strarted with hishis own experience when he was in college,and met with thewhere he met other people that waswho had different culture,custom,and language. i thought , heI've always thought that he would graduates from top uUniversity in indonesia, but in the fact he was nohe hasn't.
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    • I realize that how successful he was.And now he was continuing his study in univesity of jogjakarta for doctor,and i got the point from this story that everywhere we studied, it was depend on yourself,so what we wanted, it should be allowed by effort and prayer.
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    • I realized that how successful he was. And now he was's continuing his study in uies at the Univesity of jJogjakarta foras a doctor,and i got. I think the point ofrom this story is that everywhere we studied, it wasy depends on yourself,so what we wanted, it should be allowed by effort and prayer. ves. So by effort and prayer we will obtain what we really want
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