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  • Pop music

    • I love pop music, it helps me happier and more relax after school.
    • I started listening to pop music everyday when I was in grade 7.
    • When I was surfing the web, I saw a Korean music band.
    • This band had 7 little girls, they were so cute and talent.
    • During 2 years later, I had been only listening to Korean songs.
    • But one day, my friend made me listen to US and UK songs, I was impressed by Taylor Swift's and The Wanted's voices.

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