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TODAY
- Today was normal day as always l spend.
- These day, I am concerning about my university life.
I think it will be too difficult.
- I searched english academy. Tomorrow.
- I will go Gangnam station with parents

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句子 1
- Today was normal day as always l spend.
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- Today was a normal day, as always l spend.
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- Today was normal day as always ~~l spend~~.
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句子 2
- These day, I am concerning about my university life.
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- These days, I am concern~~ing~~ed about my university life.
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- These day, I am concern~~ing~~ed about what my university life will be like.
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句子 3
- I think it will be too difficult.
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句子 4
- I searched english academy. Tomorrow.
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- I searched efor an English academy. Tomorrow.
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句子 5
- I will go Gangnam station with parents
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- I will go Gangnam station with my parents.
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- I will go to Gangnam station with my parents
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