添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

stop4567からのテキスト - English

    • Hi. I'm new to here.

  • I'm here to learn English and Spanish.
    • I can write English a bit but I'm still not good enough.
    • I hope I can improve my writing here and help other people who's learning Korean.
  • I'm learning Spanish too but it's only been a few days.
    • So all i know is 'hola!', 'adios', 'gracias!'.
  • If i get better in my Spanish, I will write here in both Spanish and English.
    • By the way I also decided to stop smoking I hope i success both in quitting smoking and learning Spanish.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English