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  • Today I have been to an exhibition about the great artist Niki de Saint Phale and I would like to tell you a bit about it.
    • First do not try to get there unless you live in Paris because the exhibition will be over by February 2nd.
    • Then if you live in Paris Region you must arm yourself with lots of patience and warm clothes because, once you get there you have, unless you booked your place, minimum two hours waiting.
    • This morning I got there ten thirty-five in the morning and was told two hours, no-one among my family and friends wanted to wait so long so I had to do the line alone, I had a book and lots of good mood with me.
    • I had also a good warm tee-shirt and a trousers.
    • But I didn't take good socks or boots and no umbrella and it started to rain.
    • Fifteen minutes after, rain stopped and with other visitors we started to talk about the line, about how the Grand Palais is always good making good long waiting lines.
    • And about how one must have good motivation to get to that exhibitions.
    • Then we looked at the other lines wondering if it is worth the value to book on the web or buy their short the line pass when...

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    • Then if you live in Paris Region you must arm yourself with lots of patience and warm clothes because, once you get there you have, unless you booked your place, minimum two hours waiting.
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    • Then, if you live in the Paris Region, you must arm yourself with lots of patience and warm clothes because, once you get there you have, unless you booked your place, minimum two hours waiting.
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    • ThenSecondly, if you live in Paris Region you must arm yourself with lots of, or the outskirts, you must be prepared to be patience and bring warm clothes too because, once you get there you have, unless you've booked your place, minimuma two hours waiting. at least.
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    • This morning I got there ten thirty-five in the morning and was told two hours, no-one among my family and friends wanted to wait so long so I had to do the line alone, I had a book and lots of good mood with me.
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    • This morning I got there at ten thirty-five in the morning and was told two hours, n. No-one among my family and friends wanted to wait so long so I had to dostay in the line alone,. I had a book and lots of good mood with me.
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    • This morning I got there at ten thirty-five (in the morning/am) and was told two hours, no-one amongin my family and friends wanted to wait aso long as that so I had to do the line alone, I had a book and lots of good mood withwait by myself, though I had a book and was in good spirits (so it didn't bother me).
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    • Fifteen minutes after, rain stopped and with other visitors we started to talk about the line, about how the Grand Palais is always good making good long waiting lines.
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    • Fifteen minutes after, the rain stopped, and with other visitors we started to talk about the line, about how the Grand Palais is always good at making good long waiting lines.
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