添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Ariantisanからのテキスト - English

  • bad weather

    • today the weather is too damn hot, actually it was burn my skin but i tried to cover it with sunblock and it completly worked, but i also got headache, it was so painful. although the weather is bad,but it was very useful to dry my chlotes.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English