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    • London

    • London, the capital of United Kingdom is a city where lived one million people in 19th century, it was the biggest town in the world.
    • That's why this city needs to have a subway (several train lines underground) .
  • And in 1836, the first line of subway to be built from London Bridge in Central London to Greewich.
    • Then, firstable, we will try to find why London was need to buid à subway and after, we will try to know how the London Underground emerged.

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    • London, the capital of the United Kingdom is a city where in the 19th century one million people were living. it was the biggest town in the world. And in 1836, the first line of subway was to be built from London Bridge in Central London to Greewich. Then, firstly,(or first of all) we will try to find why London needed to build a subway and after, we will try to learn how the London Underground emerged.
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    • Then, firstable, we will try to find why London was need to buid à subway and after, we will try to know how the London Underground emerged.
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    • Then, firstable,ly,(or first of all) we will try to find why London was need to buid à subway and after, we will try to know how the London Underground emerged.
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