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    • Good Morning, below I would like to describe the goals achieved during my schooling and training process: - DESIGN AND SET-UP OF SHOWROOMS SHOWCASES and FAIRS: ability learned working two years for the Coin Group, a company very demanding for what concern the windows and stores set-up.
    • Consolidated in the last two years, working for the company of luxury furnishings fabrics, Dedar, for the set-up of its showrooms present in the most important European cities and collaborating with its prestigious partner Hermès, for the image of US showrooms in New York, Dallas and Los Angeles.
    • - CONSTRUCTION OF MOODBOARDS FOR COORDINATED AND PRESENTATIONS: ability learned during the school years for the planning of photo shooting that has led me to develop a particular aptitude the images research and the beautiful presentation of the work.
  • Expanded and improved working in Dedar, refining the taste and developing the sense of color.
    • - GRAPHIC DESIGN OF INVITATIONS, BROCHURE AND PRESS KIT: ability learned during the school year with the use of pc programs such as Photoshop, Illustrator, and Indesign and consolidated over the past two years to design invitations, promotional material, brochures and press kits for Dedar.
  • - DEVELOPMENT TOOLS FOR SALE AND COMMUNICATION: ability learned over the past two years to design samples, corporate gifts and tools for sales agents.
    • Thanking you for your attention, I stay available for an informational interview.

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    • Good Morning, below I would like to describe the goals achieved during my schooling and training process: - DESIGN AND SET-UP OF SHOWROOMS SHOWCASES and FAIRS: ability learned working two years for the Coin Group, a company very demanding for what concern the windows and stores set-up.
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    • Good Morning, ¶below I would like to describe the goals achieved during my schooling and training process: ¶¶- DESIGN AND SET-UP OF SHOWROOMS SHOWCASES and FAIRS: abilityskills learned working two years for the Coin Group, a company very demanding for what concerncompany for how the windows and stores were set-up.
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    • Consolidated in the last two years, working for the company of luxury furnishings fabrics, Dedar, for the set-up of its showrooms present in the most important European cities and collaborating with its prestigious partner Hermès, for the image of US showrooms in New York, Dallas and Los Angeles.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Consolidated in the last two years, working for the company of luxury furnishings fabrics, Dedar, for the set-up of its showrooms present in the most important European cities and collaborating with its prestigious partner Hermès, for the image of US showrooms in New York, Dallas and Los Angeles.
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      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
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    • - CONSTRUCTION OF MOODBOARDS FOR COORDINATED AND PRESENTATIONS: ability learned during the school years for the planning of photo shooting that has led me to develop a particular aptitude the images research and the beautiful presentation of the work.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • - CONSTRUCTION OF MOODBOARDS FOR COORDINATED AND PRESENTATIONS: abilityskill learned during the school years for the planning ofa photo shooting that has led me to develop a particular aptitude the images research and thefor researching images and beautifully presentation ofing the work.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
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    • - GRAPHIC DESIGN OF INVITATIONS, BROCHURE AND PRESS KIT: ability learned during the school year with the use of pc programs such as Photoshop, Illustrator, and Indesign and consolidated over the past two years to design invitations, promotional material, brochures and press kits for Dedar.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • - GRAPHIC DESIGN OF INVITATIONS, BROCHURE AND PRESS KIT: abilityskill learned during the school year with the use of pc programs such as Photoshop, Illustrator, and Indesign and consolidated over the past two years to design invitations, promotional material, brochures and press kits for Dedar.
      caterphilliecaterphillie profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
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    • - DEVELOPMENT TOOLS FOR SALE AND COMMUNICATION: ability learned over the past two years to design samples, corporate gifts and tools for sales agents.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
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