添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

DashaGVからのテキスト - English

    • My dream

  • Hello!
  • My name is Dasha.
    • I'm a student of school.
    • I'll pass exam by English.
    • I know that it is very difficult.
    • Training takes much effort and I try to do a lot of exercises everyday.
    • And if my exam results are good enough, I'll go to the university in Moscow.
  • I want to be a journalist.
    • To my mand, it is the best job in around the world.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English