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Text from fajo - English

  • An ordinary life

    • Million peoples of us are the same ordinary life all around the world.
    • When you are Young, you spend usually twenty years at school.
    • If you're interesting by studies you can progress all over.
    • In the same time, you have boyfriends or girlfriends and like to go out to dance, to practice sports, to see movies.
    • One day, an event occurs : you have a job, but below your skill.
    • You have to accept it because you don't have the choice.
    • After some years, you decide to married you because you're sure you met the perfect love.
    • A new event occurs : you have your first child ; you're are father or mother ! Oh my god ! It's great !
    • You make a credence to buy a house for your family, a car to drive your child at school, to maintien them healthy.
    • And you continue to work to pay these.
    • More you're older, more you have to do exertion to rest a respectaly parent.
    • Along the time, you prefere activity is watching tv.
    • You did'nt like go out for différents reasons.
    • One day, you look yourself with your beer, in your sofa, and you think to yourself : I'm a fat asschole in a sheet life.

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