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hello, my name is Maria and I'm 16.
I live in Nova Siri, Basilicata.
- This summer I will go to Ireland for study's holiday and I would like to learn English very good.
- In My family are 5: I, my parents and my 2 brothers.
I go to school by bus in Policoro at Scientific's liceo.
- My school is very big and it's beautiful.
There are about 700 students.
I have 2 best friends.

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- hello, my name is Maria and I'm 16.
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- I live in Nova Siri, Basilicata.
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- This summer I will go to Ireland for study's holiday and I would like to learn English very good.
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- This summer I ~~will go~~'m going to Ireland ~~for~~to study~~'s h~~ on Holiday and I would like ~~to learn English very good.~~very good English. ( I would like to improve my English)
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- In My family are 5: I, my parents and my 2 brothers.
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- IThere are five in Mmy family ~~are 5: I~~: Myself, my parents and my 2two brothers.
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- I go to school by bus in Policoro at Scientific's liceo.
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- My school is very big and it's beautiful.
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- My school is very big ~~and it's~~- about 700 students and it's also very beautiful.
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- There are about 700 students.
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- I have 2 best friends.
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