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    • Letter for a university

    • I am French student and currently attending a second year international trade.
  • I would love to be able to study at your university next year.
    • Therefore, I would like to have information about your the Bachelor of Arts in Media Management.
    • This program attract me because it deals with communications,marketing...
    • I have a high school diploma of Science in technology and management with a specialty Human Resources.And for 2 years now, I am in university of international trade (Which is a HND :Higher National Diploma).
    • Should I have to join the first year or can i join the 3rd year ?
    • Knowing that I already a French higher school diploma.
    • (degree for which I would graduate in May 2015) I had the opportunity to come to Phnom Penh from April to July 2014 for a 2 months marketing internship in a company and I stayed for discovering your country for one month.
    • I enjoyed this incredible experience, so I now wish to study at the Royal University of Phnom Penh.
  • To enroll in your program what is the admission for foreigners?
  • I am very motivated to be able to integrate the idea of your university.
  • Thank you very much in advance for your answers.

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