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  • Child exploitation

    • Child exploitation is one the principal problems that the society faces.
  • It refers to the employment of children in any work that deprives them of their childhood and of receiving an education.
  • Child exploitation is not a recent problem.
    • In the XIX century, during the Industrial Revolution, many children worked 14 or more hours a day at the factories and they were paid only a fraction of what an adult would get.
    • They had to work with dangerous equipment, so accidents were very common and many of these children got injured or they even died.
    • Nowadays this situation isn't very different.
    • It's true that during the last century governments across the world have developed a legislation to prohibit child labour, but it continues to exit.
    • According to Unicef 168 million children aged 5 to 17 are engaged in child labour, in other words, 1 of every 6 children in the world suffers child exploitation.
  • In some countries young people aged 15 to 17 work at least 43 hours a week.
    • Child exploitation can be in presented different forms like slavery, child soldiering,drug trafficking or sexual exploitation.
    • At present there are around 300000 children who fight in a war, in India there are 12,6 million children caught by child trafficking networks, there are 8 countries which still haven't legislated against child labour (Somalia, Equatorial Guinea, Guinea Bissau, Maldives, Marshall islands, Myanmar, Tuvalu y Turkmenistan), etc. These figures are chilling: child labour affect children’ health and personal development and interfere with their education, so the children can’t improve their personal situation and they are trapped in a vicious cycle.
    • There is still a lot to be done against child labour, but we can start to make aware people about this horrible problem.

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    • In the XIX century, during the Industrial Revolution, many children worked 14 or more hours a day at the factories and they were paid only a fraction of what an adult would get.
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    • In the XIX century, during the Industrial Revolution, many children worked 14 or more hours a day at the factories and they were paid only a fraction of what an adult would get.
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    • They had to work with dangerous equipment, so accidents were very common and many of these children got injured or they even died.
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    • They had to work with dangerous equipment, so accidents were very common and many of these children gotwere injured or they even dikilled.
    • They had to work with dangerous equipment, so accidents were very common and many of these children got injured or they even digot killed.
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    • It's true that during the last century governments across the world have developed a legislation to prohibit child labour, but it continues to exit.
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    • It's true that during the last century governments across the world have developed a legislation to prohibit child labour, but it continues to exist.
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    • According to Unicef 168 million children aged 5 to 17 are engaged in child labour, in other words, 1 of every 6 children in the world suffers child exploitation.
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    • According to UnicefNICEF 168 million children aged 5 to 17 are engaged in child labour, i. In other words, 1 of every 6 children in the world suffers from child exploitation.
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    • Child exploitation can be in presented different forms like slavery, child soldiering,drug trafficking or sexual exploitation.
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    • Child exploitation can be in presented in different forms like slavery, child soldiering,drug trafficking or sexual exploitation.
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    • At present there are around 300000 children who fight in a war, in India there are 12,6 million children caught by child trafficking networks, there are 8 countries which still haven't legislated against child labour (Somalia, Equatorial Guinea, Guinea Bissau, Maldives, Marshall islands, Myanmar, Tuvalu y Turkmenistan), etc. These figures are chilling: child labour affect children’ health and personal development and interfere with their education, so the children can’t improve their personal situation and they are trapped in a vicious cycle.
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    • At present there are around 300.000 children who fight in a war, in India there are 12,6 million children caught by child trafficking networks, there are 8 countries which still haven't legislated against child labour (Somalia, Equatorial Guinea, Guinea Bissau, Maldives, Marshall islands, Myanmar, Tuvalu y Turkmenistan), etc.¶These figures are chilling: c. Child labour affect children’s health and personal development and interferes with their education, so the children can’t improve their personal situation and they are trapped in a vicious cycle.
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    • There is still a lot to be done against child labour, but we can start to make aware people about this horrible problem.
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    • There is still a lot to be done against child labour, but we can start to make aware people aboutware of this horrible problem.
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