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  • Early my exam

  • This is early my English exam.
    • I must choose three theme.
  • This is the first theme: The moonwalk London is a marathon.
    • I choose to speak about this theme because it's a big manifestation for the awareness for vital breast cancer causes.
    • With this marathon, the charity "Walk the Walk" committed to raising money for looking this sick.
    • So, this running is for women, but men can participate !
    • The moonwalk London is in streets of London, and in Hyde Park, the challenge starts and finishes at Battersea Power Station.

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