添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

therunnerからのテキスト - English

    • The teletext

    • While I read an atricle in newspaper, I thought about it.
    • I was shocked, in Germany are 12 billion people reading the teletext in television every day.
    • Then I would know more about it and looked in the internet how many poeple in Germany are useing Facebook every day.
    • Only 13 billion, in this matter it's necessary to know that Facebook is much more popular, thats sucessful for the teletext.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English