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Poruka od alessandra0389 - English

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HELLO
- Hello, i'm Alessandra and i'm 25 years.
- I would learn english because i would change my life place. thank you. byeee

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- Hello, i'm Alessandra and i'm 25 years.
  Glasajte sada!
- Hello, iI'm Alessandra and iI'm 25 years old. (Very good, mostly just needs capitols because 'I'm' is short for I am and 'I' on its own needs a capitol always).
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Rečenica 2
- I would learn english because i would change my life place. thank you. byeee
  Glasajte sada!
- I would like to learn english because iI w~~ould~~ant to change ~~my life plac~~where I live. tThank you. ~~byeee~~Byeee (or 'bye' but I'm guessing you know that ;)).
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- I would like to learn eEnglish because iI w~~ould change my life plac~~ant to move. tThank you. bByeee.
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