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Would people not cook at home at all in the future?
I don’t think so.
Although, more and more people choose to go out for eating and there are lots of the restaurants you can find.
But in my opinion, finally you should learn how to cook at home.
- Because, first of all, you can eat more health if you cook at home.
- Because you will use less oil and more nutritional food, such as organic vegetable, fresh meat etc. Secondly, it is more economic than you eat at outside.
Because, the price of the food in the supermarket is always the lowest.
Finally the most important thing is cooking food for family is the best way to get the happiness.

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- Would people not cook at home at all in the future?
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- I don’t think so.
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- Although, more and more people choose to go out for eating and there are lots of the restaurants you can find.
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- But in my opinion, finally you should learn how to cook at home.
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- Because, first of all, you can eat more health if you cook at home.
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- Because, first of all, you can eat more healthily if you cook at home.
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- Because you will use less oil and more nutritional food, such as organic vegetable, fresh meat etc. Secondly, it is more economic than you eat at outside.
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- Because you will use less oil and more nutritional food, such as organic vegetables, fresh meat etc. Secondly, it is more economic than if you eat at outside.
  Nerve 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
  
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- Because, the price of the food in the supermarket is always the lowest.
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- Finally the most important thing is cooking food for family is the best way to get the happiness.
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