Korekty

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  • Some history geography 2

  • The first Pakistani immigrants made mediocre jobs(works) as newspaper seller.
  • Now, there are much fewer immigrants who make these jobs(works) because their children were born in England and are more educated.
  • There are also the Chinese stores of corner(place) of street which disappear little by little because the children of immigrants refuse to resume(to take back) the family store.
  • For example, since 10 last one years, the number of manufacturers and sellers of tobacco to be decreased in 25 %.
  • This decline is due to a change of attitude of the children of the immigrants; as they received a better education they want one works paid well with good perspectives while their parents(relatives) worked hours for a starvation wage.
  • The children of Chinese immigrants are rarely inspired.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • Now, there are much fewer immigrants who make these jobs(works) because their children were born in England and are more educated.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • There are also the Chinese stores of corner(place) of street which disappear little by little because the children of immigrants refuse to resume(to take back) the family store.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • This decline is due to a change of attitude of the children of the immigrants; as they received a better education they want one works paid well with good perspectives while their parents(relatives) worked hours for a starvation wage.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6