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Text from Dounia92 - English

  • some history geography

  • The document 1 explains where do the immigrants in England: between 1930 and 1950 many areas that belonged to the British Empire gained independence.
  • Parliament then decided to bring the former colonies into a union called the Commonwealt.
  • Faced with the Second World War damage the government encouraged immigration.
  • Thus, between 1940 and 1950, to rebuild the country at war, tens of thousands of immigrants have left their country.
  • Basically they had to return to their country but they end up staying because they had started families.
  • Document 2 explains that in 2002 there were 4.5 million immigrants (7.6% of the total population) and 3.1 million (44% increase) in 1991.
  • The graph shows the number of immigrants of every ethnicity.
  • Ethnic minorities live in urban areas very wide.
  • Half of the ethnic minorities (48 %) live in the region of London where they represent 29 % of the total of the residents.
  • There are debates around the fact that in London 300 languages(tongues) are spoken in the schools of the capital and a unique(only) coeducation(mixing) of culture wants that is established(constituted) a real asset(trump card).
  • Inner london (the central zone of London) is the only zone where the black immigrants surpass in numbers the Asian immigrants by a ration of two blacks for an Asian.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • The document 1 explains where do the immigrants in England: between 1930 and 1950 many areas that belonged to the British Empire gained independence.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • Thus, between 1940 and 1950, to rebuild the country at war, tens of thousands of immigrants have left their country.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • Document 2 explains that in 2002 there were 4.5 million immigrants (7.6% of the total population) and 3.1 million (44% increase) in 1991.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • Half of the ethnic minorities (48 %) live in the region of London where they represent 29 % of the total of the residents.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • There are debates around the fact that in London 300 languages(tongues) are spoken in the schools of the capital and a unique(only) coeducation(mixing) of culture wants that is established(constituted) a real asset(trump card).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • Inner london (the central zone of London) is the only zone where the black immigrants surpass in numbers the Asian immigrants by a ration of two blacks for an Asian.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11