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- I have brought a bottle of perfume last week.
- I had no interest about perfume untill I known a saying that the lady without perfume hasn't perspect.
- I have no idea about perfume, but it aroused my curiosity, and made me try to buy one.I browsed the online maket, then found a band "5th Avenue"which is the symbol of modern and fashion in my mind.
- Sprayed perfume on my hand,it seem a garden arose in front of me, with enjoying different fragrances of 3 notes, realising why woman are carzy about perfume.

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- I have brought a bottle of perfume last week.
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- I ~~have br~~bought a bottle of perfume last week.
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- ~~I have br~~Last week I bought a bottle of perfume ~~last week~~.
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- I had no interest about perfume untill I known a saying that the lady without perfume hasn't perspect.
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- I ~~had no~~was not at all interest ~~about~~ed in perfume untill I ~~known a saying that the lady without perfume hasn't perspect.~~came across the following quote attributed to Coco Chanel, "A woman who doesn't wear perfume has no future"
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- I had no interest ~~about~~in perfume untill I ~~known a~~heard a quote saying that ~~the lady~~a woman without perfume has~~n't perspect~~ no future.
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- I have no idea about perfume, but it aroused my curiosity, and made me try to buy one.I browsed the online maket, then found a band "5th Avenue"which is the symbol of modern and fashion in my mind.
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- I have no idea about perfume, but it aroused my curiosity, and made me try to buy one. I browsed the online maket, then I found a band "5th Avenue"which is the symbol of modern and fashion in my mind.
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- I ~~have no idea~~know nothing about perfume, but ithis quote aroused my curiosity, and ~~made me~~hence I decided to try toand buy one. I browsed ~~the~~ online ~~maket, then found a band "5th Avenue"which is the~~and found a perfume by Elizabeth Arden called "5th Avenue". To me, 5th Avenue is symbolic of ~~modern and fashion in my mind~~fashion and modernity.
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- I haved no ~~idea~~knowledge about perfume, but it aroused my curiosity, and made me ~~try~~want to buy one. I browsed the online ~~maket, then~~, until I found a brand called "5th Avenue" which is the symbol of modern and fashion in my mind.
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- I ~~have no idea~~didn't know anything about perfume, but this quite aroused my curiosity, and made me ~~try~~want to buy onsome. I browsed ~~the~~ online ~~maket, then~~and found a brand called "5th Avenue"," which ~~is the~~ symbol ofizes modernity and fashion ~~in my mind~~to me.
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- Sprayed perfume on my hand,it seem a garden arose in front of me, with enjoying different fragrances of 3 notes, realising why woman are carzy about perfume.
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- SI sprayed perfume on my hand, it seemed a garden arose in front of me, with enjoying different fragrances of 3 notes, ~~realising~~I find out the reason why womaen are carzy about perfume.
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- SAs I sprayed perfume on my hand, it seemed as though a garden had aroisen in front of me, ~~with enjoying~~smelling of three different fragrances ~~of 3 notes,~~and then I reali~~sing~~zed why some womaen are ~~carzy about~~obsessed with perfume.
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- SI sprayed the perfume onto my hand, and it seemed a garden arose in front of me~~, with~~. While enjoying different fragrances of 3 notes, I reali~~sing~~zed why woman are carazy about perfume.
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- SI sprayed the perfume on my hand, and it seemed like a garden arose in front of me, with ~~enjoying~~many different fragrances ~~of 3 notes,~~. I now reali~~sing~~ze why womaen are ~~car~~so crazy about perfume.
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