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a french song translated
I promise you my soul's secrets key I promise you the life from my laughs to my tears I promise you fire instead of the Guns.
Never farewells but goodbies.

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标题
- a french song translated
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- I promise you my soul's secrets key I promise you the life from my laughs to my tears I promise you fire instead of the Guns.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Never farewells but goodbies.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2