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Text from ShirleyLin - English

  • I am learning how to write a business letter.

  • Dear Customer, We are in receipt of your telegram on May 6th, from which we understand that you have received our order to buy 2 000 dozens of shirts.
  • We take pleasure in informing you that the confirmed, irrevocable Letter Credit No.
  • 7634, an amounting to $ 17 000, which is opened in the morning through the Commercial Bank, Tokyo.
  • Upon the receipt of this notification, please range the shipment of our products contracted at the latest possible delay.
  • Moreover, we have been informed that S.S Wuxi is scheduled in May 28th from your district to our port, we hope that this shipment will be carried by that ship.
  • Should this trial business(试购) prove to satisfactory to our customer, we care sure a number of the shipments will be place.
  • Our close cooperation will be highly appreciated in this respect and meantime we look forward to receiving ship device.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Vakya 1
    • Dear Customer, We are in receipt of your telegram on May 6th, from which we understand that you have received our order to buy 2 000 dozens of shirts.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
  • Vakya 2
  • Vakya 3
  • Vakya 4
    • Upon the receipt of this notification, please range the shipment of our products contracted at the latest possible delay.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
  • Vakya 5
    • Moreover, we have been informed that S.S Wuxi is scheduled in May 28th from your district to our port, we hope that this shipment will be carried by that ship.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
  • Vakya 6
    • Should this trial business(试购) prove to satisfactory to our customer, we care sure a number of the shipments will be place.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
  • Vakya 7
    • Our close cooperation will be highly appreciated in this respect and meantime we look forward to receiving ship device.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7