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    • One day .I and my family went to a trip .It was excited , but there was something wrong.we had other family went with us .they had a servent .she didn't bring the passport.
    • The police didn't allow to enter the UAE .we was late .after 2 hour's we moved .My brother sat with the house made because she forgot the passport.

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    • One day .I and my family went to a trip .It was excited , but there was something wrong.we had other family went with us .they had a servent .she didn't bring the passport.
      투표하세요!
    • One day .Ime and my family went to a trip . It was excited , but there was something wrong.w We had other family wentcame with us .t. They had a serveant . she didn't bring the passport.
    • One day .Ime and my family went ton a trip . It was excited ing, but there was something wrong.we had There was another family who went with us .t. They had a serveant .s. She didn't bring the passport.
    • One day .IMe and my family went ton a trip .It was exciteding , but there was something wrong.we had oOther family wentcame with us .they had a serveant .she didn't bring the passport.
    • One day .I and m. My family and I went to a trip . It was excited ing, but there was something went wrong.w We had other family went with us .t. They had a serveant .s. She didn't bring the passport.
      투표하세요!
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    • The police didn't allow to enter the UAE .we was late .after 2 hour's we moved .My brother sat with the house made because she forgot the passport.
      투표하세요!
    • The police didn't allow to enter the UAE .we wasere late .after 2 hour's we moved .My brother sat with the house maide because she has forgotten the passport.
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