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  • Marina el alamen

    • It was a very intersting day that i won't forget , i was on a trip with 3 of my friends and other colleagues, we went to a place called "Marina el alamin" it is a historical place between Alexandria and Marsa matrouh .
    • we saw the remains of ancient walls ,buildings and tombs , that trip was organised by a doctor in our university , after we finished watching those nice stuff we found that there is another place called " Porto Marina " but there is a high fence between that place and the place we were in because if anyone wants to go to porto marina have to buy a ticket inorder to enter there but we jumbed on that fence and there was a sea but it has't deep bottom just we found rocks so we sat on rocks and had pictures .
    • we were lucky because there were not any guards there :) then after returning to our place and other colleagues one of my friend told me that we did something illegal , i didn't know that i just followed them :) i said ohh thank god every thing was ok :) then we went to another place called "Abo sir " at the end of that day i was really dead tired and when i returned to home just slept :) it was one of my best days sorry for that long text i hope you like it Bye

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    • It was a very intersting day that i won't forget , i was on a trip with 3 of my friends and other colleagues, we went to a place called "Marina el alamin" it is a historical place between Alexandria and Marsa matrouh .
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    • It was a very interesting day that i won't forget , i. I was on a trip with 3 of my friends and other colleagues, w.We went to a place called "Marina el alamin" it is a historical place between Alexandria and Marsa matrouh called " Marina el alamin" .
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    • It was a very interesting day that iI won't forget , i. I was on a trip with 3 of my friends and othersome colleagues, we went to a place called "Marina el alamin" it is a historical place between Alexandria and Marsa mMatrouh .Called "Marina el Alamin"
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    • we saw the remains of ancient walls ,buildings and tombs , that trip was organised by a doctor in our university , after we finished watching those nice stuff we found that there is another place called " Porto Marina " but there is a high fence between that place and the place we were in because if anyone wants to go to porto marina have to buy a ticket inorder to enter there but we jumbed on that fence and there was a sea but it has't deep bottom just we found rocks so we sat on rocks and had pictures .
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    • we saw the remains of ancient walls ,buildings and tombs , that trip was organised by a doctor in our university , a.After we had finished watching those nice stuff s ,we found that there is another place called " Porto Marina " but.However, there is a high fence between that place and the place we were in because if anyone wants to go to pPorto Marina and Marina el alamin In order to visit Porto mMarina , visitors have to buy a ticket inorder to enter there buts.By the time we jumbped on that fence and, there was a sea but it hwas't deep bottom jus not so deep. After that we found rocks sto we sat on rocks and had pictures sit on and take some photos.
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    • we were lucky because there were not any guards there :) then after returning to our place and other colleagues one of my friend told me that we did something illegal , i didn't know that i just followed them :) i said ohh thank god every thing was ok :) then we went to another place called "Abo sir " at the end of that day i was really dead tired and when i returned to home just slept :) it was one of my best days sorry for that long text i hope you like it Bye
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    • ¶wWe were lucky because there wereas not any guards there :) t. Then after we had returninged to our place andwhere other colleagues were waiting, one of my friend told me that we did something illegal , i. I didn't know that iI just followed them :) i. I said ohh thank gGod, every thing was ok :).tThen we went to another place called "Abo sir " a". At the end of that day iI was really dead tired and when iI returned to home, I just slept :) i. It was one of my best days. ¶¶sorry for that long text i hope you like it ¶¶Bye
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