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- Chritsmas
- Yesterday was the eve if Chritsmas and I and my family get a big dinner with a lot of food Today I need to run to burn calories but we will have a big lunch.
- I hope to not putting weight

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- Yesterday was the eve if Chritsmas and I and my family get a big dinner with a lot of food Today I need to run to burn calories but we will have a big lunch.
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- Yesterday was ~~the eve if~~ Chritstmas ~~and I and~~Eve so my family ~~get~~and I had a big dinner with ~~a lot of food¶Today I~~many food.¶So today I really need to run to burn all this calories but we will have again a big lunch. because it's Christmas.
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- Yesterday was the ~~eve if~~ Chritstmas ~~and I~~Eve and my family ~~get~~and I had a big dinner with a lot of food.¶Today I need to run to burn calories but we will have a big lunch too.
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- I hope to not putting weight
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- I hope t~~o not putt~~hat I won't gaing weight.
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