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    • a Paraty Given to a Hundred-day-old Baby

    • I went to a mall to buy a present for my friend’s daughter named Seahui.
  • This Sunday will be 100th day since seashui was born, so the couple invited their friends to celebrate it.
  • In South Korea, most parents usually do it.
  • The only difference is celebrating with who.
  • Some parents just do it with only family, but others do it with friends as well as family.
    • A long time ago, medical techniques were not developed much, so many infants were died before 100th day.
    • This was derived from celebrating about their surviving.
    • Nowadays, the infant mortality rate is very lower than before, but still Korean parents want to celebrate it.

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