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  • Voyage by yatch

    • Some years ago, I made a voyage by yatch from Reunion island to Mauritius island.
    • This two islands are far away each other about 300 km by sea.
    • We must wait October or November, when the wind is not stronger, to go there.
    • Here, we named this wind "The Alizés".
    • We left Reunion at 8 pm and we arrived at Mauritius in the morning, after 12 hours of voyage.
    • The night the sea is black, and I was afraid.
    • During the navigation, we listened music, drunk beer and wine, ate a lot of foods.
    • When someone slept, the other watched out if another boat arrived too near.
    • When you are on the sea, the one lights you can see are the stars.
  • If you are lucky to progress below the lune, you can see flight fishs or dolphins.
    • Mauritius is a small island with more indians natives.
    • There are a lot of shops of clothes, this is their speciality.
  • You eat indian spice food or european food.
  • The trades are not expensive because the Mauritius money is less strong than the Euro.
    • There are beautiful beatches and not mountains.
  • The coasts are very tourist with bars and hôtels.
  • You can also spend your stay at citizen's home and see how they live every day.
  • It's more interesting because you can meet a lot of people and share your expériences.
    • It was a great remember.

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