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    • a short biografy of John Lennon

    • Jhon Lennon was born in 1940 in Liverpool.
    • When his parents deforced, his mother married an english soldier and John was left with his aunt Mimi, in Woolton.
    • During a concert of Quarrymen Jhon Lennon met Paul McCartney and after they founded in 1957 with Ringo Starr and George Harrison "the Beatles".
    • In 1963 john Lennon went away from aunt' s house, but he and the Beatles come to write some song there.
  • The Beatles, after got a discographic contract with Parlophone, published the first song "love me do".
  • They were very famous immediately.
  • After a lot of song, concert and records The beatles desbanded in 1970 and John began writes only his song with his wife Yoko Ono, like Imagine.
  • In 1971 Lennon published his first single records,power to peaple, where there are some song that talk of peace and hope idealists against the war in Vietnam.
  • During this time John Lennon wrote some song but he did' t publish records with their.
  • On november in 1980 he published the last records, Double Fantasy.
  • On 8th of dicember in 1980 a boy killed he in upper west side in New York.

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