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  • The Republic of Karelia

    • The Republic of Karelia is located in the northwest of Russia, between the basins of White and Baltic Seas.
    • There are about 27,000 rivers and 60.000 lake, that lapped round in woods, and 72 islands, most of them skattered across Lakes Ladoga and Oneg.
    • It is real paradise for people, who love wild nature and activity holidays.
    • There are a lot of hotels and tourist centre and near 4.000 cultural subjects.
    • In Karelia everybody find interesting things for self.
    • The Republic catch a people’s eye at any time, but in summer it is the incredible green miracle, that make heart missed a beat.
    • The Impenetrable forests, alive with sounds of bird’s music, the whitewater rivers, the outer islets, when there are longstanding charge, a lot of rare wild animals and, of course, a lot of legends about witches, shamans, heros of Kalevala, wondrous animals and spirits of nature.
  • This is The Karelia.
    • Or, rather, it is by one of the best party of this place.
    • In winter in Karelia people go skiing, go to campaign in forests or mountains.
    • In winter the republic become real ice tale.
  • Food is usual, but if you aren’t Russian, it will be interesting.
    • There are a lot of national viand with fish, blueberry, cloudberry, cranberry and etc. This national cuisine characterizes by big forest variety: berries, mushrooms, green.
    • In conclusion, I want to say, The Republic of Karelia is a amazing place!
    • It is islet of wild nature and ancient Russian and karel architecture, it is a margent of mystic legends and chimney-corner of old Russian towns.

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    • The Republic of Karelia is located in the northwest of Russia, between the basins of White and Baltic Seas.
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    • The Republic of Karelia is located in the northwest region of Russia, between the basins of White and Baltic Seas.
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    • There are about 27,000 rivers and 60.000 lake, that lapped round in woods, and 72 islands, most of them skattered across Lakes Ladoga and Oneg.
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    • There are about 27,000 rivers and 60.000 lake, that lapped round in woods, and 72 islands, most of them skattered across Lakes Ladoga and Oneg.
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    • The Republic catch a people’s eye at any time, but in summer it is the incredible green miracle, that make heart missed a beat.
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    • The Republic catch aes peoples' eyes at any time, but during summer it is the incredible green miracle, that make s the heart missed a beat.
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    • The Impenetrable forests, alive with sounds of bird’s music, the whitewater rivers, the outer islets, when there are longstanding charge, a lot of rare wild animals and, of course, a lot of legends about witches, shamans, heros of Kalevala, wondrous animals and spirits of nature.
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    • The Impenetrable forests, alive with sounds of bird’s music, the whitewater rivers, the outer islets, when there are is longstanding charge, a lot of rare wild animals and, of course, a lot of legends about witches, shamans, heroes of Kalevala, wondrous animals and spirits of nature.
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    • There are a lot of national viand with fish, blueberry, cloudberry, cranberry and etc. This national cuisine characterizes by big forest variety: berries, mushrooms, green.
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    • There are a lot of national viand with fish, blueberry, cloudberry, ¶cranberry and etc. This national cuisine characterizes by a big forest variety: berries, mushrooms, and greens.
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    • It is islet of wild nature and ancient Russian and karel architecture, it is a margent of mystic legends and chimney-corner of old Russian towns.
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    • It is islet of wild nature and ancient Russian and karel architecture, i. It is a margent of mystic legends and chimney-corner of old Russian towns.
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