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Hello
- Hi, first at all thank you very much for accepting me as a member.
- I´m here because I´m learning english in a distance course, that means I need to learn on my own.
- For this reason I would like to write and tell you my experiences about me.

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

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- Hello
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句子 1
- Hi, first at all thank you very much for accepting me as a member.
  赶紧投票吧！
- Hi, first atof all, thank you very much for accepting me as a member.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I´m here because I´m learning english in a distance course, that means I need to learn on my own.
  赶紧投票吧！
- I´m here because I´m learning eEnglish in a distance course, that means I need to learn on my own.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- For this reason I would like to write and tell you my experiences about me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- For this reason I would like to write and tell you about my experiences ~~about me~~.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3