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  • Flight to Melbourne, Australia

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  • :D For a flight for a tradeshow for 23rd -24th february 2014 in Melbourne, by counting the time difference, and for your confort in business class, I suggest: The Singapore Airlines for 4 449€.
    • You are taking the Flight 319.
    • There is no direct flights available for this period.
  • From London to Melbourne ; one stop-over.
  • The whole trip last 24h10.
  • For this selected period, this is the shortest flight we can offer you according our price-comparison sites.
    • Flight departure on 21st february at 20h35 from LHR (London Heathrow).
    • The stop-over is at 17h15 in SIN Singapour on 22nd december.
    • This first flight last 12h40.
  • And the stop-over ; 4h.
  • Then a plane change is required, you are taking the Singapore Airlines, flight 227 at 21h15, you'll arrive in MEL Melbourne (Mel-Tullamarine) at 07h45 on 23rd february.
  • Second flight last 7h30.
  • For more wellbeing, you could turn your seat into berth.
  • The Mantra Tullamarine Hotel (Corner Melrose & Trade Park Drive, Tullamarine, Tullamarine, 3043 Melbourne, Australia) is the cheapest I found.
  • It offers free shuttle from the airport to the hotel.
  • This one is a modern hotel located 10 minutes away by car from the airport.
  • And it is 17 km from the center of Melbourne.
  • And 5min from the Gladstone Park.
  • Room : 155€ per night, breakfast included.
  • Climatisation, bath, spa bath...
  • I booked a spacious room opening on the town view.
    • Services : sauna, a lounge area, restaurant, Wifi connexion, luggage service, reception, free shuttle.
  • From Melbourne to London : one stop-over.
    • Singapore Airlines, flight 208 Return is included and last 22h50.
  • The flight departs on 24th february at 19h30 from MEL Melbourne, (Mel-Tullamarine).
    • The flight last 7h50.
  • There will be a short link of 55 minutes at SIN Singapour (SIN-Changi).
  • Then changing planes, Singapore Airlines flight 306 which departs at 01h15 arrives in London at 7h20.
  • The flight last 14h05min.
  • After booking, Parkroyal Melbourne Airport has caught my attention.
  • Strategically located in the heart of the airport, Parkroyal Melbourne Airport (Arrivals Drive, Tullamarine, 3042 Melbourne, Australia) is a 4,5 stars hotel.
  • It is instantly connected to the terminal by a gangway.
  • And you will be within a two-minute walk from departures& arrivals hall.
  • Room: 179€ per night. King Size bed.
  • I booked a spacious room opening on the town view(32m²). Climatisation.
  • Breakfast for 24€.
  • Services : television, wifi connexion, indoor pool, fitness center, bar, breakfast, restaurant, paid parking, can pay with your MasterCard, laundries, a lounge area, rent car, luggage service...

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