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- The winter
- This year the winter is awesome because i dance and eat very much, with my family and my friends.
- After i go to the disco for dance salsa and other géneros with handsome men.

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- This year the winter is awesome because i dance and eat very much, with my family and my friends.
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- This year the winter is awesome, because iI am danceing and eating very much, with my family and my friends.
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- After i go to the disco for dance salsa and other géneros with handsome men.
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- After ~~i go to the disco for~~, I went to the nightclub to dance salsa and other ~~género~~types of songs with a handsome mean.
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