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  • A short biography of Freddie mercury

  • Freddie mercury was born in 1946 in zanzibar, Tanzania.
  • At age 8 he studied at st peter' s boy school and the school principal noted his music talent. after he studied at mary' s school in mumbai.
    • At age 18 he and his family had to move about to england, because in zanzibar there was the zanzibar revolution.
    • In england he stay in a small village, near london.
    • He carried on his study in isleworth polytechnic, he got the best result on art exam and got the admission at Ealing art college.
    • In addition to he worked in a catering service at a shopping centre.
    • He started sing in the "ibex", a small band in liverpool.
  • In 1970 was born the Queen and freddie mercury was the singer.
  • In short period the queen became very famous.
  • In 1974 he declared that he was "gay like a daffodil" on 24 of november in 1991 he died for AIDS.

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