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I think that it's high time to improve my english skills.
- I'll try to take into account of my teachers' remarks.
In connection with my work I try to learn 10 english words every day.
How do you imagine the world's end?Where is that?

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- I think that it's high time to improve my english skills.
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- I'll try to take into account of my teachers' remarks.
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- In connection with my work I try to learn 10 english words every day.
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