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  • Unaffordable House

  • House is really expensive in our city.It is unaffordable for the commen person, also it creats some problems.
  • My friend Susan has been nervous these days, because she has a different opinion with her boyfriend,where to buy a house.She decided to buy a house in the centre of the city.Concerning about their future, having a house in the city centre is a better choice,not only for the childrend's education but also taking care of the old.But only can be afforded second-hand house by them.
  • However, her boyfriend prefered the house in downtown,because he can afford a new one there.
  • What's more, Susan thought that buying a house in city centre is also a investment.I have no idea about that, but everything can be solved with a good conunication, I supposed.

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    • My friend Susan has been nervous these days, because she has a different opinion with her boyfriend,where to buy a house.She decided to buy a house in the centre of the city.Concerning about their future, having a house in the city centre is a better choice,not only for the childrend's education but also taking care of the old.But only can be afforded second-hand house by them.
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    • What's more, Susan thought that buying a house in city centre is also a investment.I have no idea about that, but everything can be solved with a good conunication, I supposed.
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