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SEGÍTS JAVÍTANI MOST!Javított

Dianawalker szövege - English

  • Sport

    • To my mind one of the most famous kind of sport is football.
    • Why did i decide so?
  • As a matter of fact, everyone knows football.
  • Whereas we can watch commercial on TV, overhear men's discussion about football's events.
  • As for me, I am not into football at all.
    • Although i dislike watching any kinds of sport on TV or at the stadium.
  • However, there are so many people who are crazy about it.
  • Others can't live without football.
  • Owing to these crazy people fans football stadium can become a war zone.
    • For instance riot in Moscow after Japan beat Russia.
  • Russian fans rioted, burning cars and smashing store windows.
  • The cause of this is not only fans' disappointment.
    • Some people have mob mentality.
  • If they are part of the in crowd they can behave badly themselves with others.
    • In a crowd individual thinks no one knows who he is.
  • He feels anonymous.
  • The attitude that separated just fans from crazy fans is the importance of winning for them.
  • many fans drink a lot at the football games.
  • When people drink, they are more likely to do abnormal things.
  • ---------------- I tried

KÉRLEK, SEGÍTS KIJAVÍTANI MINDEN MONDATOT! - English