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Summer 2014
- This summer, I spend my holiday at my friend's home, Jérémie.
- Jérémie is as my older brother.
- He's 19, he lives in France for his studies but he comes to Guadeloupe to see his family.
- Then, every time he comes for holiday, I sleep at his home.
- His family is my family.
- I love them like mine.
- He leaves in a few day. I'm sad.
- Time is soon over.
- To take advantage of last days, we decide to go to the beach.
- The weather is sunny this morning.
- We put our swimsuits, eat little, and go the beach. It's crowded.
- There are a lot of people today.
- We find a little place to put our towels and go at once to the water.
- When we finished, we go back to home to take a shower.
- The women at first. I finished.
- I sit on the sofa and I watch TV, when a boy comes to interrupt me.
- He wants that I call Jérémie.
- Shalala971
November 2014
Voĉdoni nun!
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