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    • SELF-EVALUTION AND OBJECTIVE:Strong adapt ability in raison of study abroad, ability to work independently and solve problems, ambitious attitude essential, team worker, willing to assume responsibilities and work under pressure.
  • Main courses: Engineering Thermodynamics, Fluid Dynamics and solid mechanics, Heat Transfer, Energy Optimization for Buildings, Refrigeration & air-conditioning direction, Principles of Heat Exchanger and Design, Ventilation Engineering, Combustion.
  • THERMAL AND OPTICAL ENGINEER /SUMMER INERN: Characterize the thermal and optical properties of the automobiles lighting systems.
  • (Light source: Philips P21W-LL).
  • Set up the optical experiments and tests, pre-treat data by Matlab.
  • Develop the numerical models by COMSOL MultiphysicsTM.
  • Write technical reports and file the data.
  • SUMMER INERN :Study the physical and chemical performances of combustion of the diesel engine.
  • Identify the components and measure theirs concentrations in exhaust gas of vehicles.
  • Write the technical reports and draw schema.
  • STUDENT SECRETARY / PART TIME JOB:Assist teachers’ work; organize students’ activities; perform office daily work.
  • Visit the workshop of production of gold; study the separation flow and metallurgical processes of gold.
  • Visit the workshop of production of nonferrous metal.
  • Design the factory buildings and machines with AutoCAD.
  • Write the technical reports.
  • English: Good command in writing, work level in speaking French:Good level in listening and speaking, work level in writing

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    • SELF-EVALUTION AND OBJECTIVE:Strong adapt ability in raison of study abroad, ability to work independently and solve problems, ambitious attitude essential, team worker, willing to assume responsibilities and work under pressure.
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    • SELF-EVALUTION AND OBJECTIVE:Strong adapt ability in raison of I can easily adapt because i have studyied abroad, ability to workI work well independently and i am good at solveing problems, i have an ambitious attitude essential, team worker,, i am a team player, and i am willing to assume responsibilities and can work under pressure.
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    • Main courses: Engineering Thermodynamics, Fluid Dynamics and solid mechanics, Heat Transfer, Energy Optimization for Buildings, Refrigeration & air-conditioning direction, Principles of Heat Exchanger and Design, Ventilation Engineering, Combustion.
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    • THERMAL AND OPTICAL ENGINEER /SUMMER INERN: Characterize the thermal and optical properties of the automobiles lighting systems.
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    • STUDENT SECRETARY / PART TIME JOB:Assist teachers’ work; organize students’ activities; perform office daily work.
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    • English: Good command in writing, work level in speaking French:Good level in listening and speaking, work level in writing
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