批改

现在就来帮忙修正吧！裸眼

從faylo11來的文本 - English

  • My week-end

    • It was good, I spent the time with my friends especially when my friend finished his military service and come back to his home, we went to the farm of my friend's grandfather, we sit on his garden playing guitar and flute but I was just listening because I can't play anyone of those things.
    • After that, me and another friend start cooking for lunch but potatoes were burned when when I was frying, so my friends take the chance for mocking me then we had our lunch.
    • We sit on the hall of the house after finishing lunch and we start talking about many things and saying some jokes.
    • Now It's 6 PM, each one return home.
  • We had a great time and It was one of my best days.

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

  • 标题
  • 句子 1
    • It was good, I spent the time with my friends especially when my friend finished his military service and come back to his home, we went to the farm of my friend's grandfather, we sit on his garden playing guitar and flute but I was just listening because I can't play anyone of those things.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • It was good, I spent the time with my friends especially when my friend finished his military service and coame back to his home, we went to the farm of my friend's grandfather, we sit on his garden playinged guitar and flute but I was just listening because I can't play anynone of thoese things.
      MikeBCN24MikeBCN24 profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
  • 句子 2
    • After that, me and another friend start cooking for lunch but potatoes were burned when when I was frying, so my friends take the chance for mocking me then we had our lunch.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • After that, meI and another friend started cooking for lunch but potatoes were burned when when I was frying, so my friends takeook the chance for mocking at me then we had our lunch.
      MikeBCN24MikeBCN24 profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
  • 句子 3
  • 句子 4
  • 句子 5