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Text from Hajar96 - English

  • homework : write a personal funny story

    • I have a very funny story but i don't how to protect its sense of humour .
    • These is some events : - last year my sister asked me to watch chinese opera she told me that it's very different so .
  • I was so excited to watch the video.
    • - when the music started i confirmed what my sister told because i never had listen to such music .
    • The surprise was when the singer (a woman) sing ..
  • omg the song was funny and i couldn't stop laughing.
    • - i showed it to my friend/colleague he told that he was not able to finish the video he thought that it was terrible.
    • - the day after we had a history's lesson , the teacher asked my friend to read some documents about chinese economic , so he began to read ... suddenly he started to laugh ,the teacher was angry ,me and our colleagues were wondering .
  • The teacher ordered him to leave and not to attend the lesson.
    • - when i came back to home i chatted with him he told me that i was the reason of what happened he asked me to open the history book and to see a specefic picture .... i was shocked when i saw a chinese woman that she looked like the singer ( for us all the chinese are one ) i understood what happened in the history lesson.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
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    • These is some events : - last year my sister asked me to watch chinese opera she told me that it's very different so .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • These isare some events :¶- last year my sister asked me to watch cChinese opera, and she told me that it's very different so I agreed.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • - i showed it to my friend/colleague he told that he was not able to finish the video he thought that it was terrible.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • - i showed it to my friend/colleague and he told me that he was not able to finish the video; he thought that it was terrible.
      azambazamazambazam profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • - the day after we had a history's lesson , the teacher asked my friend to read some documents about chinese economic , so he began to read ... suddenly he started to laugh ,the teacher was angry ,me and our colleagues were wondering .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • - the day after, we had a history's lesson ,and the teacher asked my friend to read some documentexts about cChinese economic s, so he began to read ... suddenly he started to laugh ,and the teacher wasbecame angry ,m. Me and ourmy colleagues wondered wondering hat it was that made him laugh.
      azambazamazambazam profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • - when i came back to home i chatted with him he told me that i was the reason of what happened he asked me to open the history book and to see a specefic picture .... i was shocked when i saw a chinese woman that she looked like the singer ( for us all the chinese are one ) i understood what happened in the history lesson.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • - when iI came back to home iI chatted with him and he told me that iI was the reason of what happened h. He asked me to open the history book and to seelook at a speceific picture .... iI was shocked when iI saw a cChinese woman that she looked like the singer ( for us, all the cChinese are one ) ilook similar). I suddenly understood what happened in the history lesson. ¶
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10