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  • Februay 22th

    • Today is Friday, February 22th.
    • Today I went to school in the morning, because after the noon the teacher got together.
    • Then, Xiomy and I went to the garden center because I love cultivating, I love planting sunflowers, but since now I want plantar some orchids, some ones blue red pink purple inter alia.
    • I love the flowers, my grandmother gave me that love for it.
    • Only my house have a garden, and I love look it in the morning.
    • Tonight Xiomy, Vivi, Karolette, Andrea, and I'm going to made a slumber party.
    • In the morning, I like when my kitten run to my bed and hide on my blanket and my dog jump on my legs, as saying: "Wake up, sleepyhead".
    • I miss the farm, I miss the animals, the chickens and chicks, the cocks, the cow and bull, ride on the horse, feed ducks and geese, the rabbits and pigs, but I want go with my girlfriend.
    • She don't know that animals, she is a girl of the city.
    • I too, but I love know other sides.
    • Turning the topic, I like watching other countrys, I want meet Czech Republic, England, France, Arabian, India, New Zeland, Canada, and others, and obviously, the country from my baby, Switzerland.

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    • Then, Xiomy and I went to the garden center because I love cultivating, I love planting sunflowers, but since now I want plantar some orchids, some ones blue red pink purple inter alia.
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    • Then, Xiomy and I went to the garden center because I love cultivating, I love planting sunflowers, but since now I want to plantar some orchids,: some ones blue and others red, pink and purple inter alia.
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    • In the morning, I like when my kitten run to my bed and hide on my blanket and my dog jump on my legs, as saying: "Wake up, sleepyhead".
      투표하세요!
    • In the morning, I like when my kitten runs to my bed and hide ons under my blanket and my dog jumps on my legs, as if saying: "Wake up, sleepyhead".
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      투표하세요!
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    • I miss the farm, I miss the animals, the chickens and chicks, the cocks, the cow and bull, ride on the horse, feed ducks and geese, the rabbits and pigs, but I want go with my girlfriend.
      투표하세요!
    • I miss the farm, I miss the animals, the chickens and chicks, the cocks, the cow and bull, ride on the horsehorseback riding, feeding ducks and geese, the rabbits and pigs, but I want go with my girlfriend.
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    • Turning the topic, I like watching other countrys, I want meet Czech Republic, England, France, Arabian, India, New Zeland, Canada, and others, and obviously, the country from my baby, Switzerland.
      투표하세요!
    • TurnChanging the topic,: I like watchvisiting other countrys,ies. I want meeto visit Czech Republic, England, France, Saudi Arabian, India, New Zealand, Canada, and others, and obviously, the country from my babmy baby's country, Switzerland.
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