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Text from jesuscuesta93 - English

    • a little phrase of my dream

  • Hi everyone.
    • My name is Jesus, i`m from colombia, i'm 20.
    • always i have love the English language , it's my favorite language.
    • today i'm going to write something for be corrected.
    • one of my dreams is travel to the UK for not only learning the language if not also to meet new friends, culture, be in a new society, new way of think, new lifestyle.
    • UK seems a great place, quiet and interesting. i want to do one great exchange since people from the east is very different that us, the Western.
    • thank you for take one second of your time to correct me.
  • Greetings from Colombia....

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English