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  • 11.7

  • Recently, I saw a comment on the Internet.
    • It said that it is no use to remember any knowledge in this technology age since we have google.
  • I felt confused about it. Is it true?
    • We don't have to recite long articles or informations we needed because we can search on the Internet and get the answers quickly.
  • There is no doubt that the Internet is of great convenience.
    • But as I pondering this comment, I gradually realize that we do have needs to remember knowledges in books.
    • For one reason, if we don't study hard on books, we won't have the ability to judge the information on the Internet.
    • There are so many cases that people were deceived by Internet.
    • In order to be sensible while reading these issues on the Internet, we need to remember basic knowledges.
    • For another reason, so large amount of messages there are on the Internet that it is difficult to choose a piece of useful news from.
    • Searching itself really demands high skills.And sometimes it just unfortunately turn out that you can not find things necessary to you on the Internet.
  • I think I have made my opinion clear enough.
    • I don't believe there is no need to study hard in this age.
  • Actually, the opposite is true.
    • As we know, we have more access to learn in today's society than any other time.
    • So we have to face fierce competition that grows day by day.
  • I think I shall study harder and harder.

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