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    • an explication letter

  • I think you have seen my resume several days ago and I can understand your opinion about my professional level.
  • I know that in France, the companies prefer the people who obtained a diploma in engineering.
  • In this way I would like to write to you in order to explain and show my passion in working in this company.
  • I collaborated with A in the aim to study automotive lighting systems, especially the light source.
  • I characterized the thermal and optical properties of the lamps and succeeded in developing complex models of the light source.
    • My work has been published in KEY ENGINEERING magazine.
    • I choose University Pairs 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as master degree in China last year.
    • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University .Compare with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
    • Please find enclosed the reference of my tutor of final year internship.

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    • I characterized the thermal and optical properties of the lamps and succeeded in developing complex models of the light source.
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    • I choose University Pairs 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as master degree in China last year.
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    • I choose University Pairis 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as a master's degree in China last year.
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    • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University .Compare with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
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    • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University . Compared with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
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      투표하세요!
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