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  • The bar graphs demonstrate the key purposes for education in different age groups and the desire of employers to support their workers` studying intention.
  • At first glance we see that there are two main reasons for education: for career development and for one`s own interest.
  • Over 54 % of people study for career in the age group under 39-year-old, while only 10-20% of them choose to study for interest.
  • Whereas the figures of students studying for both career and interest are equal among 40-49 year-old (39%), the percentage of those who study for interest is 4 times higher among people over 49 year-old (68%).
  • The second bar graph shows the support from employers given be time off or money for fees.
  • Thus, 48-60% of bosses contribute to the education of their workers under 29 year-old.
  • Students between 30 and 49 year-old receive help from only 30-33% of employer.
  • Surprisingly, 40 % of employers give a hand to people over 49 year-old who are willing to study.
  • To sum up, the purposes for education varies among people from different age groups.
  • While the youngsters tend to study for career, students over 49 prefer to study for their own interests.
  • Additionally, over 30 % of employers support their workers` intention to study.

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