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    • A Story About My First Camping (It is not about me)

  • I will never forget my first camping holiday.
  • It was the first sunny day in the summer.
    • We had arrived to the camping not far from a river and put our tents.
    • It was the beautiful plase in the nature.
    • My friends were glad to be there because they had been in camping before.
    • I was the first time in camping and therefore I was a little bit diffused.
    • I found the nature quite beautiful but it was boring to fishing or playing outside and I prefered to read an interesting book that I had held from my home.
    • One day my friends had called me to join them in playing football.
  • I thought it is too hot for it.
    • I had sat on the grass and had been reading a book until afternoon.
  • My friends were not glad that I was always sitting in my tent and reading the book.
    • They had decided to joke and the next day they did it.
  • In the morning I had gone out of my tent to have breakfast with my friends.
    • The had already grilled the sausages and I started to eat them.
    • At this time some of my friends had come to my tent and started to yell that there was a snake in my tent.
    • I was so scared that I hadn't come in my tent all day.
    • But I had been playing and fishing all day with my friends near the river.
    • It was the perfect day Even I forget that there had been a snake in my tent that could eat my book.
    • In the afternoon we had come back to or place and my friends admited that it was a joke.
    • I was angry and pleasant together because this day I had enjoyed in the nature without the book.

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