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  • Child abuse essay

    • Child abuse has become a very major part of the society.
    • Cruel people that society can't avoid nowadays everyday abuse of the defenseless little children unfortunately.
    • Child abuse seems as a trend nowadays all around the world and it is happening more than one can imagine.
  • These innocent, harmless children are being abused by strangers and sometimes by their loved ones.
    • Children everywhere are abused daily, from the United States to China, to right next door especially in Turkey it happens everyday and this could effect and stun their physical and mental growth.
    • The crucial fact that child abused must come to end can be demonstrated in many ways, there are three main types of child abuse: physical, sexual, and psychological.
  • Physical abuse can be as minor as a hit and as extreme as confinement to a cage.
    • Sexual abuse ranges from just touch, to actual penetration.
    • Being neglected, and being told that one’s self is not adequate enough to be an acceptable human being, is known as psychological abuse but at the end it all comes down to serious physical or emotional maltreatment in these children.
  • Child abuse can mess up child’s adulthood; one abuse can lead to another.
  • Approximately five children die every day from child abuse.
    • Abused and neglected children are more likely to grow up and become criminals and it is bring about a troubled society.
    • First of all,as the government , we are intending to do some public awareness activities.
  • Public awareness activities are an important part of an overall approach to addressing child abuse and neglect.
    • The purpose of public awareness activities is to raise community awareness of child abuse and neglect as a public issue and to provide the public with information about available resources and solutions.
    • In designing prevention education and public information activities we cooperative with State Children's Trust Funds without that we have got some communication with National Committee to Prevent Child Abuse and we are going to use a variety of media to promote these activities, including public service announcements ,press releases ,posters,information kits and brochures and television or video documentaries and dramas.
    • Our another plan is home visitions programs .This programs that emphasize the health and well-being of children and families have existed in the United States since the late 19th century accomplished.Organizations and agencies in fields as varied as education, maternal and child health, and health and human services, use home visitation programs to help strengthen families.
  • Home visitation programs offer a variety of family-focused services to pregnant mothers and families with newborns.
    • Activities encompass structured visits in the family's home, informal visits, and telephone calls.
    • Threads to be addressed in this program are positive parenting practices and nonviolent discipline techniques,child development;maternal and child health issues;accessing available social services establishing social supports and networks learning to advocate for oneself, one's child, and one's family and preventing accidental childhood injuries through the development of a safe home environment.
    • Our last project is skills-based Curricula for children.Many schools and local community social service organizations offer skills-based curricula to teach children safety and protection skills.
    • Most of these programs focus efforts on preventing child sexual abuse and teaching children to distinguish appropriate touching from inappropriate touching.
    • Many curricula have a parent education component to give parents and other caregivers the knowledge and skills necessary to recognize and discuss sexual abuse with their children.
    • Curricula may use various methods to teach children skills including workshops and school lessons,puppet shows and role-playing activities ,films and videos and workbooks, storybooks, and comics.
    • To conlcude this is a serious problem that we should take into consideration by the steps given above.
    • We are confident in this regard this is the best way of solving child abuse and sticking to these precautions will provide us success as soon as possible.

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    • Cruel people that society can't avoid nowadays everyday abuse of the defenseless little children unfortunately.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Cruel people that society can't avoid nowadays everyday abuse of thUnfortunately, cruel people who abuse defenseless little children unfortunatelare unavoidable in our society.
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    • Children everywhere are abused daily, from the United States to China, to right next door especially in Turkey it happens everyday and this could effect and stun their physical and mental growth.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Children everywhere are abused daily, from the United States to China, to right next door, especially in Turkey i. It happens every day and this could eaffect and stunt their physical and mental growth.
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    • The crucial fact that child abused must come to end can be demonstrated in many ways, there are three main types of child abuse: physical, sexual, and psychological.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • The crucial fact that child abused must come to end can be demonstrated in many ways, t. There are three main types of child abuse: physical, sexual, and psychological.
    • The crucial fact that child abused which must come to an end, can be demonstrated in many ways, t. There are three main types of child abuse: physical, sexual, and psychological.
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    • Being neglected, and being told that one’s self is not adequate enough to be an acceptable human being, is known as psychological abuse but at the end it all comes down to serious physical or emotional maltreatment in these children.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Being neglected, and being told that one’s self isyou are not adequate enough to be an acceptable human being, is known as psychological abuse but at. In the end it all comes down to serious physical or emotional maltreatment in these children.
    • Being neglected, and being told that one’s self is not adequate enough to be an acceptableed as a human being, is known as psychological abuse but at the end it all comes down to serious physical orand emotional maltreatment inof these children.
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    • The purpose of public awareness activities is to raise community awareness of child abuse and neglect as a public issue and to provide the public with information about available resources and solutions.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • The purpose of public awareness activities is to raise community awareness of child abuse and neglect in the community as a public issue and to provide the public with information about available resources and solutions.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
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    • In designing prevention education and public information activities we cooperative with State Children's Trust Funds without that we have got some communication with National Committee to Prevent Child Abuse and we are going to use a variety of media to promote these activities, including public service announcements ,press releases ,posters,information kits and brochures and television or video documentaries and dramas.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • In designing prevention education and public information activities we cooperative with State Children's Trust Funds without that we have got some. In addition we have established communication with the National Committee to Prevent Child Abuse and we are go. We are also planning to use a variety of media to promote these activities, including public service announcements , press releases , posters, information kits and, brochures, and television or video documentaries and dramas.
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    • Our another plan is home visitions programs .This programs that emphasize the health and well-being of children and families have existed in the United States since the late 19th century accomplished.Organizations and agencies in fields as varied as education, maternal and child health, and health and human services, use home visitation programs to help strengthen families.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Our aAnother plan of ours is home visitations programs .This. These programs that emphasizes the health and well-being of children and families have existed in the United States since the late 19th century accomplished. Organizations and agencies in fields as varied as education, maternal and child health, and health and human services, use home visitation programs to help strengthen families.
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    • Threads to be addressed in this program are positive parenting practices and nonviolent discipline techniques,child development;maternal and child health issues;accessing available social services establishing social supports and networks learning to advocate for oneself, one's child, and one's family and preventing accidental childhood injuries through the development of a safe home environment.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Threads to be addressed in this program are positive parenting practices and, nonviolent discipline techniques,child development;, maternal and child health issues;, accessing available social services, establishing social supports and networks, learning to advocate for oneself, one's child, and one's family and preventing accidental childhood injuries through the development of a safe home environment.
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    • Our last project is skills-based Curricula for children.Many schools and local community social service organizations offer skills-based curricula to teach children safety and protection skills.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Our last project is skills-based Ccurriculaum for children. Many schools and local community social service organizations offer skills-based curricula to teach children safety and protection skills.
    • Our last project is skills-based Ccurriculaum for children. Many schools and local community social service organizations offer skills-based curriculaum to teach children safety and protection skills.
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    • Most of these programs focus efforts on preventing child sexual abuse and teaching children to distinguish appropriate touching from inappropriate touching.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Most of these programs focus their efforts on preventing child sexual abuse and teaching children to distinguish appropriate touching from inappropriate touching.
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    • Many curricula have a parent education component to give parents and other caregivers the knowledge and skills necessary to recognize and discuss sexual abuse with their children.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Many curriculaums have a parent -education componentng function to give parents and other caregivers the knowledge and skills necessary to recognize and discuss sexual abuse with their children.
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    • Curricula may use various methods to teach children skills including workshops and school lessons,puppet shows and role-playing activities ,films and videos and workbooks, storybooks, and comics.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Curricula may use various methods to teach children skills including workshops and school lessons, puppet shows and role-playing activities , films and, videos and, workbooks, storybooks, and comics.
    • Curricula mayum uses various methods to teach children skills including workshops and school lessons,puppet shows and role-playing activities ,films and videos and workbooks, storybooks, and comics.
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    • We are confident in this regard this is the best way of solving child abuse and sticking to these precautions will provide us success as soon as possible.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • We are confident in this regardthat this is the best way of solving child abuse and stickadhering to these precautions and programs will provide us success as soon as possible. ¶
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