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    • a part time came so suddenly

    • When i was going to have a supper , my anut(my mother's friend) called me to help her relative to teach their children to do the homework.
    • There were 2 children, the sister is the grade1 of the junor middle school,and the brother is the grade5 of pramry school.
    • I like they very much,and they like me too.
    • And i will teach they until the teacher who their grandma had been employed come.So,tthe night of these days, i will go to do my this part time.
    • Mainly teach they the Maths and English.I want the sister to play this website too.
    • But she can't play the computer besides the winter and summer holiday,and i can understand that.Because after the school,they will have much homework to do.I hope i can help they in their study.

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    • When i was going to have a supper , my anut(my mother's friend) called me to help her relative to teach their children to do the homework.
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    • When i was goile I was preparing to have a supper , my anutunt (my mother's friend) called me to help one of her relative to teach their's children to dowith their homework.
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    • There were 2 children, the sister is the grade1 of the junor middle school,and the brother is the grade5 of pramry school.
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    • There were 2 children, the sister is in the first grade1 of the junor middle school, and the brother is in fifthe grade5 of primamry school.
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    • And i will teach they until the teacher who their grandma had been employed come.So,tthe night of these days, i will go to do my this part time.
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    • And iI will teach theym until the teacher whom their grandma had been employed come.So,tthe night of these days. So, over several nights, iI will go to do mydo this part time.
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    • But she can't play the computer besides the winter and summer holiday,and i can understand that.Because after the school,they will have much homework to do.I hope i can help they in their study.
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    • ButHowever, she can't play on the computer besides theexcept on winter and summer holiday,and i cans, which I understand that.B. This is because after the school, they will have much homework to do. I hope iI can help theym in their study.
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